Sorrygirl99's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Victoria]

good picture and all... but

you might need to add lines to the hair... because from when i first looked at it, i thought that the eye was 2 different colors... which would be cool, but that's not what it is suppose to look like...
anyways, it should hav more shading... and it should atually be DOING something... like in a scene of talking with someone... when it's just someone standing there... it usually is of someone doing something... or if the person is just standing there, make sure they look fucking amazing.
If it doesn't, then you are bound to get a low score...
enjoy reading this~

JoSilver responds:

nope... not gonna do that because thats just how I draw her.

[ODM II issue 15 page 2]

Dude this is awesome! :D

I love how the story line is coming along!
I am totally drawing a pic of you! :D

TheManofSteal13 responds:

I'm glad you like it! :D
Wait till you see the next page. hehe

[Chikara Pain]

i just HAD to leave a review..

the picture looks AMAZING.
I love how the she looks, but my favorite part is the shirt and how it folds!
I do that type of folds sometimes, but i think you picked the perfect spot to put the folds.
The shading is a little off though.
I mean, it's probably just the scanner or something, but there isn't any shading on the legs... and the legs look plane.... <.<
the hair and boobs look awesome. Dont listen to the other people.
... but the boobs are kind of pointy. BUT IT'S NORMAL.... in some... cultures.
backgrounds would be nice, but the picture looks good.... :3
i gave ya a 9/10 because of the legs. No folds... no shading... ect.
Like... i would add fold near the.... where the legs meet. Next time you are wearing pj pants like those... try looking there and see where it folds.... that's kind of awkward... but i do it sometimes when i dont know what to do :c

nice job~

OnionsXD responds:

Wow thnaks 4 the long and extensive review. Will work on legs next time. :3 Great constructive criticism and support! :D Nice new icon by the way to! :)

[Play with me]

I LOVE DRAWING BLOODY SCENES!

It looks really good...
bloody scenes are my favorite....
but I've been into puppets lately....
so maybe a bloody puppet i should draw? XD

awesome picture!
5/5
10/10

sweetyluli responds:

haha! Yes yes bloody sence = AWSOMENESS

puppets = <3

[night sky eye]

I LOVE THE EYE!

The eye looks amazing! I really wish i could draw eyes like that!
Anyways, i live how there are little spots of color here and there

BUT
the heart looks a little... BLAND.
Not to be mean... the heart is good... just add.... more shading even though it;s 2D

paulaamc responds:

thank you, and ok, I will do better :3 thank you for telling me that ^-^
the hair It's not much detailled because the eye is the focus xD

[The day no one died]

AHAHA!

I love it!
I love the shading and how you positioned the grim reaper in that way! I think you did an awesome job... but i think the best part is that there are beer cans everywhere, and that he is watching tv. I also like it how the place he is in looks so... dirty... but the picture that is hung up doesn't look like it would be in a dirty place...
and i know, you might be getting pissed off from this, because if i ever read a review like this... when the picture is suppose to mean so much more or something different.... soooo ya~

awesome job! if you get a score that's lower then a 3.00.... something is wrong with the world~

Enjoy reading this comment~

LaserKarl responds:

Thank you! I did enjoy reading that comment!

Actually, i didn't mean for the picture to be more than a fun idea, so you're not wrong, haha.

[Knife]

Whoa....

I like it. I REALLY like how he... or she... is smiling and stuff...
i LOVE drawing creepy people or things dying with a smile on their face...
i was actually thinking of drawing this picture of a girl with a long sword through her mouth and coming out the back of her next while she was smiling...
that... would be cool... but i cant think of an angel to draw it at.... so maybe a side view?
anyways, i have no idea why the person below me would say something like that....
well.... the back ground would be cool is it had blood splatters.. or something like that. It would make the character pop out more.
i also like the little red in the eye.... at the end....
idk if it's a blood tear starting to form, or the eye itself...
anyways, it's good enough to be fav'd by me ^.^
Good job~

Artyluck responds:

Whoa! What a nice review. Thanks a lot. :) I'm very glad that you liked it. ;) Maybe will make another version. ;D Thankies. ^ . ~

[Character Sheet 1]

i like the hair

i think that it looks really cool
i could never draw that hair... or animate it... it would be hard....
anyways, i think that the pictures turned out really cool
and that Joseph wearing a hat looks cool :3

LordArashi888 responds:

Well thanks! I might make the hair on a seperate layer on flash, and kinda give it a wavy effect. I dunno, I'll mess around with it! Yeah, Joseph said his hair is super crazy and his character needed a hat, but I didn't want to put in a baseball cap, so I did a beanie style hat!

[Character Sheet 2]

hm...

i like the girl with the horn in her head... >.>

LordArashi888 responds:

When you run out of magic, you could ram them with that horn! Ouchie!

[Arcane magic,Reloaded!]

nice picture

good news:
okay, so it's by u.... +2
The background is awesome +5
the person is awesome and i like the colors u picked for him +3

bad news:
the character looks mighty uneven.... -2

so your final score is...... 10!

XD I'm bad at math :P

ZeWitchKid responds:

note to self, never draw lineart at 3 am....
i know i screwed on major parts of that pic, i deserve a 7 really lol
but after spending 40 hours on that mofo i simply couldnt just screw it and start all over again,i might just remake it later