good picture and all... but
you might need to add lines to the hair... because from when i first looked at it, i thought that the eye was 2 different colors... which would be cool, but that's not what it is suppose to look like...
anyways, it should hav more shading... and it should atually be DOING something... like in a scene of talking with someone... when it's just someone standing there... it usually is of someone doing something... or if the person is just standing there, make sure they look fucking amazing.
If it doesn't, then you are bound to get a low score...
enjoy reading this~