the porportions
are just not right XD
i'm sorry, i know you're like... i REALLY GOOD ARTIST...
and i dont really know if you meant to do it
but the proportions... they are too out of wack XD
their heads are too big
the man's arms and hands are too small and his shoulders aren't wide enough...
the girl who is in air, her legs are too small, her arms are too small, and her head is too big...
BUT enough with the proportions..
i really think you did a nice job on the coloring, and i like the idea too ^>^
you get to see the characters real personality...
it's nice~